案例：阅读下面的学生习作，完成17-18题。熟悉的地方也有风景①轻轻地从书橱中抽落一本淡黄色纸页的书，封面上赫然写着《红楼梦》。抖落纸页上的灰尘，翻开书页，和着淡淡檀香，步入了那个曾经多么熟悉的地方——大观园，望见多少风景。葬花吟②风中，那满树的花如一只只舞倦了的蝴蝶，飘飘悠悠地落下，终于落咸了一地的残花。你担着花锄，瘦弱的身子在风中似乎要倒，单薄而又无助。你也多想化成这一地落花，去一个充满温情的地方，那里没有寄人离下的痛苦，没有孤单与落寞。你的“质本洁来还洁去，强于污淖陷渠沟”道尽了你清高而短暂的生命；你的“孤标傲世偕谁隐，一样花开为底迟”说尽了你叛逆而孤傲的性格；你的“眼空蓄泪泪空垂，抛珠滚玉却为谁”诉尽了你对爱情的无限向往和对宝玉的无边思念。杜鹃啼血，可是你千年未变的咏叹词？柳絮词③青石上沉酣的倩影惊飞花无数，你挽一髻蓬松松的青丝吞吐你心中的豪气。你没有悲天悯人的长吁短叹，亦没有世故圆滑的左右迎合，你永远保持着一份超然，一份诗意。琉璃世界的割腥啖膻彰显你巾帼红颜的豪情，你心直口快的性格为这冷清清的园子凭添几分妩媚。但坎坷的命运依旧抚不平你嘴角漾开的笑意，你微笑着，面对昨天与今日，柳絮翻飞，你童真的歌谣摇开了一方新的天地。螃蟹咏④冷香丸的清香压低了你上清苑的傲骨，你不得不莲步微移，做你大家闺秀的典范。杨妃扑蝶的烂漫隐于人后，滚滚而来的骂名使你不得不讥讽螃蟹却依然无济于事。你许是一朵紫红色的牡丹，高贵而华关，繁花尽谢之时，你在那里张扬地开放，芳香弥漫。你的平易近人被说成是世故圆滑，你对，宝玉的爱被说成是从始至终在成就婚姻。你亦是无奈的，背负着滚滚骂名却依旧款款地微笑。牡丹的华关，许是你一生的写照吧。⑤合上书本，这雍容美丽却又异常熟悉的大观园，我再一次看到许多的风景，黛玉葬花、湘云沉酣、宝钗讽蟹，伴着我长大，亦伴着我无数次地落泪。红楼女儿的迷梦谱成了一首新歌，这泪的痛血的痴可有钟子期在听？⑥这个熟悉的地方，风景很烂漫。问题：请从第②③段中找出两个错别字，从第⑤段中找出一处病句，并分别改正。
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A、consumers are sometimes irrational
B、popularity usually comes after quality
C、marketing tricks are often effective
D、rarity generally mcreases pleasure
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